Talk:One More Mile, 2003, by Kelsey Kranz

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Hey Kelsey!! Good job. This really describes you!! you used great dialogue! nice paragraph breaks-Danaka

Hey nice work, I don't know you but what I do know that story fits you. Your dialogue is great. Nikki

Kelsey, this is very descriptive and a great piece of writing. I like your use of dialogue. I feel like going out and running myself, now! -Meesha Meserole