Talk:My Brother and Me, 2006, by Kailey Clawson

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It was a good story. I like how you tell about all the similarities between you and your brother. It sounds just like me and my sister.:) -Katie Threlkeld

I liked all of the precise adjectives, and the alliteration. it was googentoggen.

I really like your introduction, it was smooth. I think you chose a good topic. I really liked the part where you decided not live in your brother's shadow anymore. --Yized

Kailey, I really liked your story. It was fun and interesting to read. I also liked the way that you described things. -Sara Wiley

Thats funny sometimes I feel the same with my sister. Rubi

Thats funny sometimes I feel the same with my sister. Rubi

Kailey, this is a great story. I can relate to this in some ways with my sister, only I am the older one. This story gave me the younger siblings point of view which was really cool. -Maquel

Thats funny. I feel the same way about my brother's and my sister at times. You did a really good job on your story. Stephanie