Talk:Childhood Holiday Meal, 2005, by Stephanie Goodwin

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I really liked the story. it put a picture in my head and it kind of makes me hungary....lol. I really like how the story is all put togther. ~Breann~


Your story was nice to read. Sounds a lot like my family at Christmas. We always have a big meal with my grandma at the head of making food. Sounds like you have had some good times! Amanda

Reading this story reminds me of my family Christmas. The same routine somehow always feels right every year. You did a nice job of connecting your story with the reader. I think that everyone could somehow relate to your same feelings whether it is Christmas or Thanksgiving or any special day.

-Kailey Clawson

I also wrote about christmas! I think your story was great, but I would to see more detail. But other than that it was great. --Yized

Stephanie I really liked the way you wrote, your opening sentence reminded me of one of a story teller, I reallly enjoyed reading your piece. I think your a good writter. I like how open and inviting your momir was. Amber Dittrich

Stephanie I really liked the way you wrote, your opening sentence reminded me of one of a story teller, I reallly enjoyed reading your piece. I think your a good writter. I like how open and inviting your momir was. Amber Dittrich