Talk:9/11 Attack, 2001, by Chris Kambhu

From MemoryArchive

I like how you give us the time and place details of where you heard about it--it helps set the scene. When I was done reading, I couldn't help but want to know more. When what happened finally did "sink in," what were you feeling? See you Friday! -Jen

i like it. u have a good memory, i dont even remember where i was. of all your memories i didnt think u would pick this one. it was good. - Katy

Great additions! I liked hearing what you thought when it sunk in. This feels like the opening to what could be a longer piece. That last sentence is really loaded. I'd still love to hear more. -Jen